Schools should get rid of uniform?
Would you imagine if your child got lost in a school field trip and they got reported missing? Imagine if your teenage daughter exits the house only wearing a crop top, and high shorts revealing everything God gave her? Or even when your child is being recognized for doing something right for our country? Whatever your opinion or situation is schools shouldn’t lose their school uniform for educational purposes, what I mean by that is….
Say you were on a school field trip and you got lost in the petting zoo and there is a crowd of adults with their kids, you get lost and you start wondering around trying to find someone that looks familiar but it seems like you can’t find anyone. In this scenario, it is really important to have a school uniform because it’s going to be easy finding your school plus if you get reported missing they can describe you. Some people can easily find another person from school but others can’t.
One day your teenage daughter isn’t your little princess/ baby anymore because she walked out of the house in a crop top, high shorts which are revealing a lot of her body, No one wants to see a girl that shows too much. If your child's school doesn’t have a uniform , they can abuse that and dress about inappropriately. These generation girls that are pre-teens and teens wear clothes that are either too high or revealing and in my opinion, makes me cringe because to think that girls that are younger than me are wearing clothes that reveal too much, to me they're still a little baby and it just looks wrong :(
Your child is on a school convention and they have just won a trophy and the announcer said “ Hello, and what school do you go to?” because she/he is confused. When you get an achievement normally your parent takes a photo of you next to your trophy wearing your uniform but if you have no uniform on it looks unpresentable. Here's another one, say your child saw some rubbish on the ground and they picked it up, someone saw it and they wanted to tell your school that on of their students picked up rubbish but they can’t so they just ignored it. Some adult likes to say to you good things you are doing in the world.
As you can see from this information that school uniforms shouldn’t be taken away because of your child/ school mate could get lost and can’t find anyone from there school, that your teenage child is dressing up in revealing clothing, and that of your child got recognized for something great they are doing for the school.
Hey Meagan this is such a good work. I like how detailed your essay and how you explain it properly. I like your opinion and your point. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Meagan. Your introduction gets the reader thinking about the issue before your paragraphs explain your ideas. I agree that uniforms help you to look presentable.
ReplyDeleteI notice that your paragraphs are a collection of situations that you get the reader to imagine, which is an interesting structure to read.
At the end of your introduction, you could change "What I mean by that is..." to something like "Here are some situations where having a school uniform is important."